Not a bad track all around... very classic sounding trance. I'm the type of guy that likes to hear something new, especially with trance. However, a few things I noticed:
-Your first break drops at 30 seconds... not much time for a DJ to mix into the track.
-Watch the use of flange in the track. This effect is already over used on the DMJ-500 by DJs. I find this effect can become very cheesy, very quickly.
-Check 1:48. The beat hits, the melody drops off and then comes abck in loud for a split second. If it was intentional, I'm really not a fan. I think the levels on that line just need to be adjusted.
-You kinda lose me after this point... until the next break down. Nice quick buildup... the sound you use at 3:15 is great! I think it could even be a little louder.
-Again, more flange throughout the track... honestly, if a DJ wants some flange, it's only button click away on the mixer. When I play a track, I like it to be clean and to the point. If I wanna mess with the effects, I'll mess with the effects the way I want.

Overall, good track. I usually lean towards the darker, harder style of trance, but this sound good. It reminds me of 1999 again!

Keep up the good work!

ah hah !

useful comments for once ...

its not actually a flanger, its a delay that uses a few millisecs and then i vary around with that

this version is shortened version just for people to listen to online, so yeh i do have a full version with mix ins and outs

know what u mean about 1:48... will take a look at it

will try increase 3:15