It's been a while since I've been producing stuff, and I just discovered how nice it is to finally get all of your creativity flowing again Well, anyway, I personally think that the track comes together around 1:17 or so. Of course, that's up to you to decide, given that you'll oblige me with a listen and a bit of feedback, please

LINK: http://www.utopiangamer.com/leechsp...us Crossing.mp3

Thanks!
~smrq

(PS: If you feel like it, feel free to check out my other track, Motion Blur: http://www.utopiangamer.com/leechsp...Motion Blur.mp3)

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first off the sounds are too computery, kick is really weak :S ilike the synths coming in at 1:45 i think, those are really nice
keep working at it,
now about the second track, motion blur,
kind of a wierd song lol, piano is really fast, i think this kinda song fits for a movie hehe
or a video game maybe, and the kick is also really weak on this :S
so ya work on those things, but u DEFINATLY have some good ideas in ur head
keep practicing,
l8r

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Thanks for the feedback Percs have never been my strongest point :/ ... I'll work on the kick though. And I see what you mean by the synths sounding computery... now that you mention it, you're right, they don't really sound good at all until 1:46ish. I'm still trying to figure out what exactly makes a sound sound cheesy and computery vs. nice and pro-sounding. Thanks for the encouragement though

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yup, those synths coming it at 1:45 are great! plus the one that comes in around 1:33, that buildup is pretty nice.
wish i could help you out with the computery sounds, but i'm not quite sure what to say. good start anyway and keep at it!

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