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dlin renco. thanks for the heads up on msn.
i like what you've done, you've mostly kept together what works, and changed things up. i don't know how to put it into words, but i like what you've done. i still prefer the original though.
as said before, you need to rework the bass slightly. it worked really well in the original, and you seem to have lost some. at certain points the kick is a bit overpowering, like the 1:28-1:35ish area, but then again i have a crappy sound system so on a normal one i bet it sounds fine.
maybe rather than copying the bassline from the original, maybe try something like in particular points in your remix, complimenting the track with a clap, or make the clap sporadic at say the point i mentioned above (1:28-1:35), like what you've got going at the end of the sample. by sporadic, i just mean change it up, while leaving the bass the same. clap-- clap clap clap -- clap, (like at 0:56)
i dunno, im a retard as they say! im just spewing crap so whatever. but yeah, definitely finish this one up!
i can send u the stormy intro mix thingie i did (all i really did was record, edit, and mix in samples overtop of the track to give it a different atmosphere.. real lame and cheesey effort i know..) and see what u think. just msn me. =)
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greg corbett | schedule | party107.com tracklists
slyxster | johnson & corbett | deepwav3 |
Progressive Transmission on Party107.com every Wed @ 5pm PST (8pm EST / 1am GMT)
Pacific Coast Frequencies on Danceradioglobal.com - trance every 1st Tues @ 4pm PST (7pm EST / 12midnight GMT)
Upcoming Gigs: none scheduled
Past gigs:
Phoenix Echo Aug 8th, 2009,
Believe @ Redroom, Feb and May 2009
Gareth Emery Boat Party - Aug 8th, 2008
Phoenix Outdoor Party - Aug 16th, 2008
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