hey julian,
overall a nice track.

percusions and bassline need some work. im missing an open hihat.
the lead sound that apears at 0.22 sounds a bit weak, try to tweak the frequencies with eq and add some delay/reverb.
vocal sounds very good. best thing about the track is definitely the break... when the melody apears at 1.15 it just sounds awesome. i think the main lead sounds a bit standart.

finaly... the break with the guitar and stuff sounds wicked but most of the other elements (bassline, percusions, lead sounds) need some improvement imo. in spite of everything this has some potential i think, keep on working.

nett mal nen paar mehr deutsche produzenten hier zu sehen.

yeah i am working but not easy without good speakers ..

bassline is little bit boring... but i think the instrument is okay... little bit "creamy" like i wanted.

all in all i have not made any EQ.

all in all there is too less reverb on the "pike" sound which fades in at 0:22... you are right.. i WILL fix this, too.

lead sound is not done... it sounds little bit thin too.

percussion (closed hihats) are too lfsdkjfpowerß928u350ßw9usoidjg... going to change this.

but... openhihat ... listening... there are some *g*... i dont want to make them louder...

i worked some hours on this wihtout any hardware...


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Last edited by tiefthon on Sep-13-2004 at 20:35

reminds me of ATB

hi m8! Trust sounds really good. It's nice hearing a radio edit, you get all the good bits, of which there are many in this tune. I'm thinking that's one of Doru's vocal samples Used very nicely too. The breakdown is really nice, you build it well and have included possibly the slowest break-beat i've ever heard! But the synths are really nice and most importantly the atmosphere is spot-on. The saw lead around 2:38 is pretty standard, which for the most part is fine, but imo this song has a slightly different mood to those which demand ye olde supersaw thingy.

hey tiefthon,

bit of a wierd start and a bit unmastered. The kick is a tad muddy, you need sum click in that. I like the analouge lead at the start, i luv them. bit of vocals not too overdone for now, works for me. a nice synth to start things up, great. Im really liking the guitar riff here and the bass change sends me (Crazy!), which is a god thing.

Simple breakdown, nice... the synths are very melodic, stil liking it here, coming backin with the breaks and main lead... yes it working for me, a very nice melody and detuned saw's.

A bit mastering work and a few element changes, maybe introduce some pads on the startup and during the composition???

Nice work, keep it up

Terry

agreed.. i feel like there's a lowpass filter on that kick

so far so good, sleek production... i love that guitar, bassline is good too. however, i do think it would be very important to add some more layers of submelodies and fx to fill out the song to make it sound more "full"

Breakdown is nice... that guitar is great. I like the feeling of the melody, very mellow and chilled out. I dont like the kick in your breakdown, it needs more defintion, sounds very muddy.

The saw arp needs to be a little louder and fuller, i might be wrong but it sounds a little too detuned to me. Something about it bothers me, it might just be the volume.

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