Don't like the bassdrum, which doesn't count for the bassLINE! It's very empty now, maybe you should add in more synth structures. I'm not sure if u should add all kinds sfx's in it, but just make it more detailed. Nothing really special about the melody, but I like what you added with it in the end.
Oh, and please add an afterbeat, such as a snare or clap!

In the process of using websley's advice, I learned a little lesson about Sonar. Note to self, after mixing down, Copy mixdown to new project. Having to go back and re-create EVERY MIDI track is tedious. Ah well, maybe its for the best. I posted this immediately after mixdown, to the dayafter re-listening process hasn't turned it to shite yet. Thanks webs, I'll take your ideas into the next mix.

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Originally posted by Pimp_fu Thanks webs, I'll take your ideas into the next mix.

Cheers mate, good luck