whew! Now thats some serious hard limiting isnt it! The Intro is a little boring... I think the synth could have been a better selection. Break into 3:00 is cool. Nice snare trap. The gated synth gets old quickly... maybe think of evolving it a little more.
Nice backing synth though... good arrangement.
Some nice skillz on the mixdown and mastering. Good Job!

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Really nice ideas in here, I like the chord progression and there's lots of nice rhythmy synths that go really well together.
Maybe you could do some work on lushing up those synths, maybe throw in some fx and adding a bit more variation in the rhythms themselves.
When that melody line comes in at 2:44 it is heaps louder than the passage before, with little build up. Sounded a little bit weird to me.