please tell me what you think,what is good and what is wrong in my tune.just leave your comments.
Krivi - Kolibri

what's wrong with this forum these days...

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Originally posted by krivi please tell me what you think,what is good

the sound quality is very good

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Originally posted by krivi and what is wrong in my tune.just leave your comments.

the song is really boring

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Originally posted by krivi what's wrong with this forum these days...

you'll work it out one day

damn...that's a long ass intro...2mins of wait ...
The break @ 2.06 is kinda overpowered...but then i hear it..
You have a good melodic rift but then it's kinda going nowhere with this tune... yep, this tune sounds more like a filler than a tune where ppl can go nuts on. You have to work more with the melody and add more to it. Build and discover, becuase it just sounds repetitive all the way. But i really like the melodic part of this and im kinda iffy on the beat. If you rework it, i want to take another listen
cheers! rex