how come no one posted yet?
well first off, its very ASOT-ish hehe
melody is very dark in the beginnning then it gets happy in the middle - end
things i think u should fix: make the kick stronger, more fuller
raise the volume of the percs a little and maybe add a little more...
and thats it for now hehe
just some mastering... nothing special
good work m8 keep it up
ttyl

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w00t Evil tune, just like the name insinuates!
i like how you utilize the main beat as a means to express what is happening in this "apocalypse".
break...after that it seemed like you should've gone mental on us and freek us out with a disgusting melody. but you didnt .
seems now that the beat overpowers the melody, either lower it or dont try to make the beat sound bland, if you get my flow.
i really didnt get to feel the break in this tune that would tie it all together. it seems though that it felt the same throughout.
really good, some fixups needed.
cheers! rex.

Thx guys for ya replies. They're very helpful for me.

blayzinyo> sorry, but i can't agree with you. This is how I see The Apocalypse. In the beginning there will be darkness and then will become light. And that's why I've built the track this way.

thanks again and I'm waitin' for more comments

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Firstly, kick is in my opinion horrible, it sounds like commercial club. Left parts of perc are good, and I don't have any reserves to them. Overally it's good, but it don't have any 'dynamite', and I think that you to many times repeat the same tune.

Greetz!

It sounds a bit unclean imo. Some mastering/eqing should do it.

Nothing special with the melody. The sound of the tune works with the name. Kicks could be better, and in general the sounds seem to join eachother into a mess sort of, I don't know how else to explain it.

It doesn't sound thin, which is good. But as Lee Silver said, you need to vary it a bit.

Overall, it doesn't sound too bad, you just need to master/eq a bit. That's the main problem imo. The rest will come out of itself
Keep it up!