Hi everyone this is my latest track..and in my opinion i think its my best so far..check it out and i hope to see some comments on it
www.soundclick.com/3/bands/finalcallmusic.htm

melody is cool, but the production is painfully amateur. keep at it dude, if you can write stuff this good and keep at it, it'll all come together soon

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w: www.luketerry.com

Thanks! i been trying my best everyday after school...i barely have anytime to do homework cuz im always trying to get better...hopefully i will.