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The lead melody is pretty good, but I keep waiting for it to come in with greater force, as it is rather subdues as of now.
After the break, make the melody more pronounced.
Nothing special to say about everything else, seems like a solid, though typical, trance background.
Ultimatly, all you have to work with is the sounds, make them fuller. This would add a lot of power to the lead, I think. Maybe make it a piano or some guitar, or a sawtooth.
Good luck! 
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