.....In My opinion obviously, but i'd like to hear some other opinions.
It was made in FL Studio, so don't be expecting it to sound very professional, but please try and appreciate the uplfiting melody that I created.
Thanks for any feedback

http://rickym.dmusic.com/

It is called 'The Forgotten City'

Thank you

No one any opinions? I need feedback please!!

hey ricks
ok first off, too much reverb, WAY TOOOOOOO much
good soft intro, maybe a little too long, now it all kicks in, hehe it kinda sounds like eurodance :S , a little too amateurish i might say, but keep practicing, but u know where to put ur notes so ur def. on the right track

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Originally posted by Sunquest hey ricks ok first off, too much reverb, WAY TOOOOOOO much good soft intro, maybe a little too long, now it all kicks in, hehe it kinda sounds like eurodance :S , a little too amateurish i might say, but keep practicing, but u know where to put ur notes so ur def. on the right track

too much reverb? - what is that?

The melody sounds nice, but I think its too old school. But you're right, it is uplifting!

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The producing isn't very good, but I have to say you've made a really nice melody and those pads are beautiful...Onyl - you're using the wrong instruments on the elements. The pads sounds like a christmas-song or something... Also - make that hihat between each kick louder and more clashy.

This production sounds exactly the same as mine did a year ago. Keep on working, and you'll experience great progress! And it's a wonderful feeling, I promise you. And then you'll be looking back on your earlier productions and laugh.

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Thanks Alex- - your opinion matches mine - as my producing is crap to be honest - I need some software with more professional sounds - as FL Studio - good for making loops - but the sounds are a bit too amateur-ish.

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Originally posted by RickyM Thanks Alex- - your opinion matches mine - as my producing is crap to be honest - I need some software with more professional sounds - as FL Studio - good for making loops - but the sounds are a bit too amateur-ish.

trust me... it wont make any difference with another sequencer... just practice!

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Originally posted by carl-b.mine.nu trust me... it wont make any difference with another sequencer... just practice!

100% right!!!
you just need practice!

Holy shit that is a really good track, I just agree, make the hi hats a little louder and put much less reverb! Nice job tho!!

The first minute and a half was kinda annoying IMO.
Yeah...the reverb is excessive.
The melody is pretty sweet...(Im a sucker for uplifting!!!WOOOT! ) K...i like what i hear besides the reverb thing. NICE.

4:00 - Oh no...we're back to this intro. Seriously chilled...but I dont like it in this song. Whats with the last 1:34? hehe TRIM!

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