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quite nicely made.. but the melody sounds random as hell... the notes just dont sound logical to me. also in the break down, the pads merge together somewhat, and the whole track has a somewhat eurodance feel to it. which isnt nessesarily a bad thing! yeah i think the bass could use some work, the note at one point in the bass line is a semi tone too low, so it clashes a bit... and also, it sounds like the bass is panning a bit, which you might try to avoid.
ps the bass note i am talking about it at (for example) 5:38, 5:52, 6:06
nice drive througout,and the percs are interesting, effects to. bass is deffo way too EJAY! lol.
nice work besides those few points 
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