Hi, just want to present you my latest track "Comatose". It's not yet complete so I'm collecting suggestions what you think about it and what I should change. It's a rather dark Trance tune with Psy and Acid elements.

Cybernetica - Comatose (7:51 min, 128 kbps)

Enjoy

kinda interesting.. but i don't like the kick at all sorry...

it sounds too clicky for my tastes and needs more oomph to it..

your track isn't bad... and it is repetitive which isn't a bad thing for psy/dark trance... the synths could be higher quality though in my opinion... and one of the most important things to remember when looping acid riffs or rhythm is to make sure the thing you are looping is high quality and catchy and interesting to listen to...

I liked all the elements you included and all the squelches and sounds you have... very interesting listen... it does kinda lack some sort of direction though...

Great piece of work, that type of psy/dark trance isn't my cup of tea but not bad considering i'm not into this type of music

Thanks for the listen and the comment

I'll have a look at these things... always got problems with the kick, haven't found out how to make it sound better, either its too muffled or too high...