Another track i dug up and managed to finish


Jonny Laris - Naicin

Dont be shy to give feedback!

enjoying this tune alot

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hoi

I like the melody though. but I dun really like the kick sound of urs. it sound alittle weird..

but melody i like.

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Lets !!!

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-=:::Currently in the stage of new tune:::=-

Nice work, but the track is a little too mild

My suggestions:

There are many opportunities for great mind blowing pads

There are many opportunities for snare-rolls

There are many opportunities for bass-solos (with the twangy bass)

Make sure you crescendo (....oooo00000OOOOOOOO!!!!) your breaks, and slap some reverb/delay in the whole mix, if that suits your style.

I'm not too much of a fan of 7:00 songs that utilize the same boom-tiss-boom-tiss scheme

Drum variation is key for this one

See if you can "dirty up the sound" a bit - unless the pure square wave is your bag.

It's a catchy riff

The kick is a little too "sticky" for me- sounds quite keyboardish

Hopefully you'll keep at this thing - just remmeber the greatest producers are unmarried 45 year olds

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