Hey guys...this is my first completed song in a while.I think it better then the original..but thats my opinion.Also i think i improved in my percussion too.Give me your advice on it and tell me what you think
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Hey there...Actually haven't heard the original...

I'll give you feedback as I'm listening to it right now...

- first I think your volume is way too high on the baseline
- you could use some effects on your leads, like a delay
- try adding a different rhythm to your baseline rather than just the -x-x-x-x pattern
- sounding repetitive at times
- at the beginning, try building up to the melodies instead of introducing it right away
- the different melodies that you have are fine, but try to have one main melody that stands out

Hope this helps...good job

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yea i was gonna change the main bassline that flows with the melody to a Running bassline..but it came out like crap.I couldnt find another octave that would sound right with the 3 measure of the bassline so i just gave it the boring X X X X like in the original.Yes i know my bassline is kinda loud..so i'll tune that down as well.Thanks for the comments though

down, and I would like to hear it

overall nice, but I think the main lead could use more space, sounds so dry, more reverb and delay
and I think, it would be nicer to let the snarerolls slowly gain loudness, they come to fast