Please write me some opinions about my track.
I need your feedbacks.

Try to variate the track a bit more, its a little repetitive. Try more automation on the synths. The kick could be improved, seems to be lacking in the lows. Most of all, try to be more original, be your own musical influence.

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Originally posted by nzo Try to variate the track a bit more, its a little repetitive. Try more automation on the synths. The kick could be improved, seems to be lacking in the lows. Most of all, try to be more original, be your own musical influence.

I think that was a little harsh, this is a nice track. i wouldnt say its too repetative. nice percs and effects. some of the synths sound quite dry and presety... but apart from that its nice. bass is nice but a litte weak. over all the melody is really nice. perhaps the track is a little long, there isnt really enough going on to justify it being that long. also perhaps a tad too much reverb here and there. nice overall atmosphere

Mike

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Thanks for your replies.

Just gave your track a listen. I thought it was pretty decent. The melodies are nice. I don't feel the track is lacking in orginality but I do have to agree with some of what the other posters said though. Some of the synths have a bit of a stale feel and could be improved by adding in filter automation and what not. That would eliminate the static feel of some of the synths.

You might also want to consider shortening the track up a bit. There isn't enough differentiation in the track to go on for 9 minutes plus.