First edit of my latest tune. As always, feedback waelcome.

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128kbps - 8.35 - uplifiting/melodic
Joey Waters -- Seca Sor [Hi Stream]
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--joey

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

Last edited by JoeyEnv on Nov-09-2004 at 20:53

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

hey dude, just having a blast so far i like the bass nice progression it has a good melodic feel to it my kinda style. The synth/Arp is nice to. The piano is cool to but the kick is weak and could be stronger. this is a nice track kinda chill but deffo driving. I like this alot man, im kinda new to producing so I dunno what else to say but maybe the mastering could be worked on also but is deffo good production on it. Keep it up!

Like it a lot. Agree the kick is a bit weak, but this is great. Gets a teeny bit boring from 1:20-1:50 IMHO.

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Originally posted by Baguio Gets a teeny bit boring from 1:20-1:50 IMHO.

that did cross my mind to

Excellently produced tune with nicely layered sounds - just add a bit of variation between 1:30 and 1:50 like they said above. Nice breakbeats too. Oh and up the kick ^^^^^!!!!!
OTher than that superb!

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Thanks guys, appreciate the feedback. I'm taking all that into consideration and i'm currently 'finishing it off' as we speak.

So, i'll upload a final edit soon.

--joey

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]