new track i have been working on for a bit. some feed back on some of the thing s tht i need to improve th=o make this better track would be greatly appreciated. thanks in advance.


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The Kick needs to be stronger, and the clap sounds muffled make it sound fuller
I like the bassline but i would try to use another synth for the bass rather than that plucked synth sound you got going on

The strings need more REverb, the melody that the strings are doing could be more intense. it sounds very good. try putting some trance synths to follow with the strings. the strings has a great melody going you just need more synths to follow up..with it and more percussion.

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