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Hi mate, this is a fantastic tune, the best of yours so far! The chord progression is simply beautiful, and is complemented perfectly by the melody.
I had two thoughts about lesbian while listening to it (the song that is). Firstly, while the guitar lead sounds brilliant when it comes in in the breakdown, I felt the need for it to develop a more complicated sound during the rest. It's also a bit hard trance for my liking.
Secondly, the song in places does drag its heels. However, I don't think the answer is to make it a 139bpm song, as the rest is great at the slower pace. I think the answer is in the percussion, a few more subtle layers of more energetic percussion would do wonders. Listen around 3:46 and there's lots of slow elements and only two fast ones.
Great effort mate, this tune is beautiful and I really enjoyed listening!
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