The intro's not bad. I think your kick could be a little tighter. As it is, its release is too long.

You sound like you're getting some clipping in the low end, you might want to look into that.

ooh, nice porta synth around 3:50.

Nice energy at 4:22.

I liked that ending.

You had some aesthetic issues in the opening. It felt like your music wasn't really jelling all that much. But once you get to the main part of your song, it all falls into place. Tighten up the intro, work on the levels, and fix the kick, and you'll have a pretty nice track.

this really does it for me.....dunno it just really goes well in my head

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thanks for the comments... I might modify the beginning a bit, since it gives u the wrong impression about the rest of this song :P Anymore?

Just for future reference, try to give some sort of a name to your files, I have tons of tracks I've downloaded from here called "trance2", "untitled" etc. and I have no idea who's made them.

The first thing I notice is how muffled everything sounds. I think it's partly because of way too much room reverb on everything and everything being just way too loud. All the tune dynamics are way off (the synth distorts massively at 3 minutes), the bass drum is pushed so far back in the mix that I can't even hear it!

Your melodies are great and the tune has a great deal of energy to it, but you seriously need to clean out the production! It just sounds too much of a mess now. I'm loving that "whiney" synth, sounds great.

Also, this tune really needs to be longer, you have too many ideas coming in too quickly.

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Thew into is wicked bro I dont see why I should not like it,is very cool ,at 1:08 turns very energetic,but in a soft way,this a really interesting kind of trance,at 2:35 imo all gets too loud and bright,as someone alrdy said u need to balance a bit all and EQ better,that synth 4:10 is great,kinda sounds like a electric guitar lead,in overall is a great track just need to be worked more into the mastering .
Reason 2.5 btw?
Kopi =o.

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I think Mr. Mystery summed it pretty much up. I like the melody! The general feel of the song is smooth and cool. U might have gone slightly overboard with the multiband compressor, boosting the low levels too much.
Excellent stuff!