- good attention to detail in intro
- Melodies in 2:00 break are nice
- The breakdown needs to buildup more tensely toward the 4/4 kick as it comes out of the blue almost
- I can't hear the snare or percussion!
- Those 2/2 hi-hats are a little to prominent I think
- Good combination subtle elements with melodic ones
- You needs louder/fuller stringers

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Thanks for the constructive critisism Much needed. I'll look into it.

If anyone else listened to it, please do comment on it

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hey hey
u got some great ideas, some things to fix, u need louder clap, and louder kick and sharper bass, and the piano needs some more reverb/release on it to make it more dreamy, and maybe a little short delay would be cool
melody is nice, structure is all good to me,
keep it up
hear u l8r

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Hi!

Great intro.. so sweet. Though whatever is playing the high melody (piano?) could use a little fattening up!

I agree with the above suggestion to boost your kick & clap.

Its a nice melody you got, though I'd like to hear a lil more variation in it.

I like your crunchy bass.. lots of texture there.

Solid tune overall - nice job,
Trevor

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nice atmopheric intro.
Good kick. Percs are ok, levels could be turned up a bit on some of them.
Intro melodies are good.
Breakdown is okay, build up needs to be more intense.
I don't like that 'piano' esq synth, too dry and maybe wants to be playing an octave lower.
Bass is okay but you need to make more of the lower frequencies.

Good tune overall, keep 'em coming!

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