Hello,

Just a sample of my latest boring track.
Any feedbacks would be appreciated.

I would like to make a vocal version of this track,
therefore I would need some vocals.

Istvan Safranyos - Empathy (sample)

Fineart - Istvan Safranyos

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Last edited by fineart on Jan-03-2005 at 12:57

is this updated from when I listened to it at 6am (my time) last night?

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remastered a bit

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"Music is the expression of the movement of the waters, the play of curves described by changing breezes. There is nothing is more musical than a sunset. He who feels what he sees will find no more beautiful example of development in all that book which, alas, musicians read but too little--the book of Nature." - Claude Debussy

awesome and firm percussion line.. the first melodic reminds me alot of Kamaya Painters, I hear some "Touched By The Sun" similarities as well... cool FX.. the bassline is truly excellent... really like this productionwise.. the melody is kinda laidback and subtle as well.. and that bassline.. WOW..

excellent work dood... to bad u aint sharing the whole thing.. if u use Reason I will eat my hat...

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he used reason.

nice, you took a few suggestions i made into consideration, i still think u should push that synth a bit more, or just drop it from before the first break down, its still short a phrase or two.

still love the ambience of the first break. nice melody. nice, ill have to put my headphones on and recheck your low levels.

i still think u can touch that piano during the break a tad to make it sound more natural, a bit of delay or echo on it by a tad, maybe give it a 1 or 2 bar solo into the next phase of your break? (but hopefully i'll get a sample of the main breakdown and see what you've done with it there).

buildup is still sweet.

i look forward to the finished product.

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Is it me, or do all of these armin pluck chord melodies always sound exactly the same. They make me nautious now because they represent the dying of original trance.

Other than that, nice track, very ASOT, well produced, just too generic for my tastes.

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hey Steve,

Really good stuff man and well-mastered. The (AvB) Synths are great, the FX is good. I love the female choir in the breakdown the melody and bass are good... make the percussion a bit harder
I enjoyed this track
keep it up mate!

-Renco

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it sounds very good, good job man

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hey, Steve,

finally you got time finish off a new track

actually, i really like this track, remind me some Aalto stuffs or something

the percussion on the bassline is really fit the track, i really like the bassline, it's driving, the melody is nice, same for the FXes, i could hear this tune in the ASOT or something,

so keep up the excellent work, mate,

Peter

sounds cool, if generic. it's lacking a lot when it kicks in tho, mainly with the synth...

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the production quality is fantastic.
the lead is a bit "euro"
try find a nicer lead synth and structure the break a bit better and this is an even better track

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quote:

Originally posted by Luke Terry sounds cool, if generic. it's lacking a lot when it kicks in tho, mainly with the synth...

Gotta agree with the part about the lead, it sounds a bit too simple? I think it lacks some energy/feeling when it kicks back in.

Intro is very good, although generic, but should work out very well.

Keep us updated mate
Cheers,
Wim

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