Hey guys, i need some feedback on my newest experiment
It's 128 kbps and just over 2 MB...
I made it in FL Studio with the plugins: Oddity, Vanguard & Pro-53...
I'm new to producing and trying to learn as quick as possible by experimenting with remixes and also with my own melodies...
I like the bassline on this track, the rest kinda sucks i guess (too much sounds at once???). Anyhow, let me now what you think!

ERIC PRYDZ - CALL ON ME (DICKIE THIJSSEN REMIX).mp3

tnx

sorry but i wont give it a listen because Eric Prydz stole Thomas Bangalters & Dj Falcons idea/work its a disgrace nuff said

sorry mate nothing personal

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The first thing I recon, is that you're using way too much reverb on your elements. Like, the bass, the clap, the hihats, the ride-hihat... The main-melody-synth sucks. And that second-melody at 1.09 is totally out of line. It's sooo false! I can't belive you don't hear that yourself?!?! And btw - I hate Eric Prydz. Even more than I hate Benni Benassi. Because they overcompress they're kickdrum all over the mix so it sounds fucked up Luckily, you didn't do that..

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well at least i got one compliment!

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sorry but i wont give it a listen because Eric Prydz stole Thomas Bangalters & Dj Falcons idea/work its a disgrace nuff said

I thought the official story was Falcon had a CDR of it and got his bag nicked, then the thief started pressing copies of the track as Falcon's?

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Originally posted by alexpea I hate Eric Prydz. Even more than I hate Benni Benassi. Because they overcompress they're kickdrum all over the mix so it sounds fucked up Luckily, you didn't do that..

you hate someone becaus they overcompress the kick in their song's...
omg.. you must hate ALOT of people if you hate someone for a small thing like that.. hehe

but i agree with alexpea.. except that i don't hate eric prydz or benni benassi

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Daniel

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Originally posted by DJ_Silverstone1 sorry but i wont give it a listen because Eric Prydz stole Thomas Bangalters & Dj Falcons idea/work its a disgrace nuff said sorry mate nothing personal

how about if i tell you that bangalter and falcon did nothing on this track. read these 2 threads first
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...%22bangalter%22
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...%22#post3180027

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Enough talking about the fakeness of the original! What about my remix, is it better?

better?! oh hell no! I can't hear the harmony anywhere! start all over on a new track, and let me know when you're finished. of this was your first production, then you have a bright future, because it's not bad at all. but it's far from good.

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damn!

Yeh, when the melody kicks in its unbearable lol. The sub-melody is almost playing to its own tune and the atmosphere is completely dead.

If this was your first tune then in a few years time your gonna be massive if you stick at it. Look for Dickie Thijssen in future ppl!

-Joey

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Nelly Furtado - Say It Right [ETP's Remix]

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Originally posted by alexpea better?! oh hell no! I can't hear the harmony anywhere!

lol pwned!

keep working at it dude

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