my first tune with fl studio, sounds quite nice i think and works great. i was working on it for about a month.

would be nice if you take the time to write a few words to let me know what you think!

gabriel

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Shait that is a cool intro!! Those percussians are spot on! And the bass is flawless! Though I don't like this reversed clap-sound. I can't believe anyone hasn't replied to this thread yet!!! Hmmm... you should lower those pads! They're way too loud. That will make the other sounds much more clear. I'm not liking the main-melody, sorry...

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quality is pretty fat m8 love the clap , the synths coming in, holy fuck its so monotinic trance style i love it to death, genious!!!
this is a kind of build i fkcin LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE!!!!!!!
so much power,
but now, the melody , one of bass pads are off note, so take a look into that, and then when it all hits, the pads are so loud the kick is almost faded... so ya, thats what i think :P
ur first 3 minutes are excellent , 11/10 but the rest is just to be honest... just my opinion though.. so keep it up man, cant wait for next track

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Agree with Sunquest. Intro is sublime but the atmosphere and quality of the build is lost in the break. Like the reversed clap ... maybe turn it down a tad though. Pads are neat and tidy. Sound quality is immense mate. Im pleased with this.

--joey

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thanks a lot for "reviewing" this!

i appreciate your opinions, and yes it's true, i could change the quality of the sound, i don't have much equipment for mastering and monitoring, just my sennheiser hd 250 and wavelab. but the quality of the track is great in MY eyes. i love how i built it up, broke it down and started trough after the break. i MY eyes it became great.

but i'm still looking forward for more opinions and critics!

thanks so much!!!!

yours, gabriel

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Loving the track,am making a mix for Dj Pi's site and was wondering when your gonna mater the tune as they say the pads are far too high just a wanna include the song in my set.am gonna include at least 1 or 2 amature songs that i like each month.

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OUCH my ears, lol. Yea, need to get the strings leveled out much better. Main thing is level out the sounds better. Other thing, something I tend to comment a lot about lately: start is not dj friendly: Need to introduce the main bassline at like 32 bars(like around 52-55 seconds or so), but that is a real easy fix. Now that bassline is killer. For the main melody, well maybe not the best thing I have heard but not bad though. Kinda energetic i think. Sending you a PM.

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track is remastered online. so everyone who was complaining that is hurts the ear, now it doesn't.

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