happy hardcore, hehehe. Good old days i like the buildup. the vocals aren't in place at all dude!!! Totally out of line...hmmm...very disapointing They don't even fit with the pads!!!!!!!! OMG what a fast arpeggio melody,wow, hehehehehe. Surprised me! But seriously, the vocals doens't fit in at all. A dub version would actually be better.

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ya the vocals are really off, but i cant make it any better basically its just a pre-version but do u get the song idea? do u like it?

BUMP

bump cammon lemme get a review

I think the idea is NOT to bump your own posts.

Try offering a listen and some feedback to other peoples songs here and they're very good to do the same back.

So..

I'm very unfamiliar with this. Gabber did you say Pea?
I can't hear nothing. Very murky and faint. 96kbps ... bah. That kick is annoying me. But the synths are good.

LOL..the vox is funny. They are in a different key. They are in time its the key signature that's off. Nice effects on the arp...good filtering. Wow. this is fast. but actually ... wait... nope. Dont like it.

K...the vocals are in E minor... I just checked and you ARE playing in E minor but your chord progressions are dissimilar enough to sound off. The F chord in your progression is creating a correction in the dissonance and makes your E minor sound like a C major chord.

hehehe...I just read this and I sound like a piano teacher. I don't have much music theory under my belt, but I know Im basically right. Maybe you should give some feedback to some others ...they can then feedback you and tell you what I mean.

Production was pretty good as far as I can tell with 96kbps. You realize SoundClick allows up to 128kpbs?? That would have helped us a bit more.

Peace bro!

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wow whats all the e-chord stuff u talking about. very interesting as i know nothing about music notes. also what did you use to see that it was e-minor beucase those kinda tools can help me a lot.

thx for the reply, i will start listening to others productions, its just that i dont really use this forum except to post my stuff. not selfish just not my type of music anymore.

plz explain in detail!

ice...you gotta give to get in return.

What did I use!? I used my ear and my keyboard. I played an E minor and could determine you were playing in the same key.

Kinda hard to make music without knowing any of it...or at least more difficult.

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so are u saying all i have to do is change the pitch on the sample? or there is no way u can make the song work with that acapella?

YOu have an extra chord in your progression. The problem melding these two is that you have a three chords playing in your tune (the inclusion of a Cmajor chord in the mix) and Fragma (I think) only uses two chords basically.
So..unless you changed your tune and took out the C maj then no...

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