Hi everybody, here is a trance track, can you say me your impressions about it?
Thanks.

Fran VD: Fly Away

Last edited by Fran on Dec-03-2004 at 17:12

Hi, listening just now.

Good solid kick drum and claps, good attention grabbing opening, especially the bassline.

The open hi hat is a bit loud but it has a good sound to it.

The melody is catchy as well, maybe a few breaks in the drums would help keep the attention of the listener as there seems to be too much coming in at some points, although it does help keep the track driving.

I like the chour and the pads at the breakdown and the plucked melody playing the 2 notes compliments the lead synth well.


It's a big hands in the air, end of night tune, reminds me a bit of the style of fictovision vs c-quence, the only thing I would say is that there seems to be a bit of energy lacking after the breakdown but it's a good track, pretty fast paced and nice sounds but the overall mix sounds good, just turn that open hi hat down a little.

I enjoyed this track though, looking forward to hearing more from you.

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thanks dude

Now the open hit hat seems to be ok

Last edited by Fran on Dec-03-2004 at 17:14

but the mastering isn't completely done

hey m8
kewl track, i think u can use some more variation on ur main melody instead of just having it looped, and u DEFinatly need louder kick, and it is alittle compressed overall. but its kewl stuff m8
keep it up
peace out

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thank you mate

Hey Fran! Listening now

Hi Amber

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Originally posted by Fran Hi everybody, here is a trance track, can you say me your impressions about it? Thanks. Fran VD: Fly Away

Hi Fran.
Ill give it a listen.

0:50 that clap is really loud!

1:10 that trumpet sound echoing becomes a little repetitive.

1:40 I like the pads that enter. goes well with the rythme.

2:18 the track takes more shape from here. I love it. Great new pads.

3:10 break. I like the high pitched rythme with the male choir pads. They go well together.

4;00 this tune has got heaps of character. the guitar layer adds to the Joy It all goes awesomely together at 5:15 with teh kick.



Great production here. Thanks for sharing Fran, I enjoyed listening to this tune. It's got a great vibe to it.

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- nice attention to detail, namely the many layers of hi-hats, etc...
- ...but they all get a little blurry for my taste, maybe use some 'hard' percs and hi hats, to make it sharper
- intro melody works nicely with the beat
- some nice melodic elements at around 4:00, followed by a soldi build up
- the buildup needs some more bottom end, like sub sweeps or something, or maybe a string note on a low octave

good mastering, btw

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