Hey guys

first time on this...displaying my tracks...im trying to develop my progressive and melodic skillz in this track...i had originally thaught of 5 different ways to make this intro...im very confident with the melody which u get a taste of at the end...but im doubting its arrangement and sounds in the riff/pads?...percussion im not certain of...some people have liked/hated it...

Have a listen...and feedback is welcome but be honest and as harsh as u want as long as u provide some info and tips i could use to make this track more enjoyable

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/d...ationsmusic.htm

be gentle im still a newb

ty in advance



Sebasano