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Hey mark,
I quite like this tune - starts slowly but thats expected for a full mix.
Dont like the hard snare, although in the drop at 5:00 it sounds good - at the beginning and end it sounds bad, especially that double snare at the end of each section :<
3 minutes+ sounds awesome.
Really nice breakdown at 4 minutes, I would reduce the panning sweep though, it makes me feel queasy on headphones! just keep it in the same place, with the filter sweep you've got it will still sound interesting i think.
5:00 when the beat kicks in, it feels like its lacking something, dunno what! Maybe the main synth could be crisper / more treble in it? E.G 4:42 kinda thing - harsh to give us a taste of that nice synth then take it out for the drop
After that its all fine apart from the snare 
If you could crit my first attempt would be great! 
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=230022
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