wow man... those synths starts at :46 seconds are nuts. i love them!
but right now you could use more push. add some more percussions to get some energy behind those crazy sounds
love what you got so far... try going for a full length of this.
bass needs a boost though now that im hearing this after the climax.
also, add some pads to get rid of that "emptiness" in the background.
great potential man. i really dig this.

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c'mon guys i'd love to hear some comments from you seasoned pros

- bass line is pretty cool
- Those synth may be a bit thin
- sample is way too short to judge song structure, melodies, allt that

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