hey.. here is something i have been working on slowly for the last month...
tried to incorporate some progressive elements with melodic and classical elements into it as well...
currently under progress (50%) which is why it's in pieces right now...
Please leave me some feedback. Definately would be appreciated! I need your comments and criticisms so i can see what works and what doesn't and to help me get some direction as to finishing it as well
Thanks!
I will post again when i manage to finish this.
EDIT: how stupid of me.. forgot link LINKY
(fast download)
Last edited by J.L. on Dec-15-2004 at 02:25
Dec-14-2004 17:59
eulerfx
BELIEVE IN ME
Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Boulder, USA
ok, aside from the fact that your nick annoys the hell out of me
- it has nice drive, from intro. maybe lower tempo just a tad
- kick is unclear for me. needs to be punchier
- i want a more prominent snare!
- i like how the trak changed subtly througout
- it seems to be lacking a leading element, like a melody or a pad or something...
- that riff that repeats throughout the song is pretty nice. maybe use a slightly less sharp intrument for it
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Dec-14-2004 19:14
iloop
one love.
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: smalltown BC
yea
yea its good- i like the feel and texture- newtrance feel and some nice background elements that work very well- hope you get the inspiration to finnish it soon...
Dec-15-2004 00:26
J.L.
Never gonna give you up.
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Toronto, Canada
eulerfx: yeah.. my username is kinda stupid... all i could come up with 3 years ago... maybe i should pm swamper
kreing: thanks, you're always very helpful
iloop: glad you liked it... you've inspired me to finish even sooner
[Progressive/Melodic] Untitled (192kbs)
