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Come on...55 views and 0 comments?

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the dl-link goes to a html? how to download the track?

Wait a couple of seconds, then a link will show up.

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Shalom! The link doesnt work.

Antonio.

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ah...ok...didnt know...perhaps you should write it below the link!

*listening*

interesting kick and hats going on at the beginning...
bass sounds cool...
i like you clap...sounds like a deep darth vader breath!
lead synth is very nice...
nice pads in the background...
chilled break..i like it...perhaps you could add some delayed/reverbed fx into it...
and you could compress your kick a lil' bit...goes under when all synths play...could be more pumpin'..i think compression should solve this prob...

overall this is a very nice production...keep it up, dude!
i like it a lot!

I've just downloaded the file, are you sure it doesn't work? You only have to wait 40 secs or smth, then a link to the file will show up in the html page.

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Originally posted by Klangzentrum ah...ok...didnt know...perhaps you should write it below the link! *listening* interesting kick and hats going on at the beginning... bass sounds cool... i like you clap...sounds like a deep darth vader breath! lead synth is very nice... nice pads in the background... chilled break..i like it...perhaps you could add some delayed/reverbed fx into it... and you could compress your kick a lil' bit...goes under when all synths play...could be more pumpin'..i think compression should solve this prob... overall this is a very nice production...keep it up, dude! i like it a lot!

Thanks mate
About the fx in the break, sounds quite interesting, maybe I'll add some...
About the kick, I think it fits the track quite good..I didn't want a massive kick..but I'll see want I can do.
Anyway I appreciate you listened to it.

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Hi there Ron,

I have to say the track is really nice except that Synth. I dont like it, i think that with a different one this one could be way better. Something else - The break is sweet and all, but its very thin, you should add a substring and use more panning and Stereo enhancing there. The intro is the best part - nice beats + perc + atmosphere.

Keep working .

Antonio.

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Originally posted by EternalMusic Hi there Ron, I have to say the track is really nice except that Synth. I dont like it, i think that with a different one this one could be way better. Something else - The break is sweet and all, but its very thin, you should add a substring and use more panning and Stereo enhancing there. The intro is the best part - nice beats + perc + atmosphere. Keep working . Antonio.

Agree with Antonio here, that synth ruins what is otherwise a very nice track...

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I took the notes Antonio and Wim, thanks for listening.
My next track will be flawless

btw although my nick is Ronk, my name is Ronen, not Ron (my last name starts with K).

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