its new and i just wanted to know what you ppl think about it. its prob gonna be one of my best tracks as im starting to get into the vsti thing and im starting to understnd things.

lead organ is prob gonna change or something (its not so bad tho isnt it).

note: i made it on sonys v700 headphones last night so i dont know how good its gonna sound on most soundsystems. use your monitor headphones or else i dont know... lol and its a 5 minute sample

honest feedback welcomed as always

thanx, jasonfrandy katana - in silence (jasonf remix) [fixed 128kbit]

Last edited by dj jasonF on Jan-09-2005 at 15:00

Well, you sure made it with headphones only!
The whole track needs alot of eqing work. About the kick - Its too hollow, you may want to change it. Try to put some perc and synths more at the front.

Hope i helped ,
Cheers,
Antonio.

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yeah it needs massive re-eq

i cant add more synths fx and stuff with this computer (pentium 3 1ghz 512ram) and all these plugins lol.

thanks for the feedback and ill try to eq it and uptate the sample

ok i fixed some things eq etc its better but still good for headphones only. i also made some things diffrent anyways

feerback welcomed
here

hrmm the link doesnt seem to be working

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Originally posted by Nrg2Nfinit hrmm the link doesnt seem to be working

yep

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Works fine with me... Sorry, but this remix you made... Well, i dont seem to be able to find a single improvement on the original. Could be me though! Anyhows for an amateur its allright, still, work needs to be done. Its all about gaining experience. Anyhows, dont mean to sound arrogant or something, my songs are way below this one u made. So keep working on it! Try a new kick and replace the bassline, maybe a sub melody or changing the synth (kinda lacks power)? Percs are very good! Good luck

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thanks, as you said im a noob and its all about gaining exp. the problem is i can even work on it anymore cuz my computer sucks. i got to export it to mp3 to listen to the differences i made and then again. im gonna get a new one but till then...

anyways ill fix the link just for those that tried and couldnt listen try here
randy katana - in silence (jasonf remix) this is @ 128kbit tho