hi there ruck...
i'm liking the song... the melody is tight. the only thing that i didn't like is the one that came in at 2:05. the rest is pretty good... i'd prefer if you compress or eq your lead to bring it up more a lil bit. good song

i agree work on compression good effort......keep it up.....

I feel for review some stuff today. .hehe! Your turn..

Listening:

00:01 ; cool, original lead!
00:14 ; nice bass line. could need some more punch on that kick. maybe? and the bass to
00:44 ; the sawpad lead is to dry in my opinion.
02:03 ; changing to some melodie. very nice! like the high lead sound there. reminds me of chrystal lead.
02:28 ; cool fx`rise there. Fit to the track
02:59 ; To bad. like I said before. that the sawpad is to dry! but. the melodie is all okey!
03:29 ; Perc is nice. spes: at 03:40!

Overall. Could to some more with the melodie maybe? just in my opinion. got some very nice chords there who wants to be used more

i agree work on compression and mastering! Mastering is everything when it comes to make music!

Keep it up mate

thanks for the feedback...i go to review all...
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Theres a lot of good ideas here, i think as said above the sawlead is a little dry, but I think there are better sounds available. Something maybe a little softer would fit in with the track better.
Also imo the clap sounds a little too loud.

other than that it sounds pretty good.