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hmm.. might check out the competition 
plus
hi hat pattern
bass is ok
like the lead sound
minus
the kick is weak
clap doesnt fit the kick
dry lead sound
climax needs power
conclusion
starts out ok, but the kick is very weak, some descent acid sounds, cool hihats, i like the lead, although it sounds very dry and detuned, and could need another layer.. the main lead definitely needs more power after the break, sounds way too dry.. and the bass needs to be more upfront and the percussion are too much upfront after the break.. and try adding some phatter strings.. i like the synth that enters in about 7:00 try using that one more..
keep it up! 
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