this is a technotrack i've been working on for about a week or two.. drop in some feedback

http://home.no.net/djoz0n/tierra
mirror; http://goodgame.no/mp3/Tierra%2520-...al%2520mix).mp3


enjoy..

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Last edited by Tiérra on Dec-16-2004 at 09:54

*bump*

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alrite mate

got to admit i think this track has great potential!

this is the kinda techno im into at the moment, track wise the mastering etc is pretty good!

im liking the main rhythm to the track and the percussion is pretty good but needs to be a bit more complex and varied IMO but apart from that its sounding pretty good

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- Songs is way too repetitive. I know its techno, but things still need to happen, it shouldn't just be noise music. Put a filter on every channel and play around with that.
- 3:34 nice break, really what techno is about
- 4:15 the bassline actually works pretty good here. Almost sounds like Fkuc's remix of Song 2, by Blur.
- The track needs more fx, like razor sweeps, or something. I would also add a chorused pad in the background, to give the track ambience. Otherwise its too dry.

I am talking about something like:
H-Bomb - Groove Attack
Red & Blue - Quintos (Nowhere Mix)

- Your percs are too tribal, make them more technoish. Use interesting intruments, not just congas.

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thanks for nice feedback.. im working on my web right now, but ill fix the track later, and ill post it here..

happy new year, btw!

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