hi guys ~ here is my new attempt in producing ~
it sounds not professional ~ but i've already done with my best so far ~
hope i will be getting feedbacks from all of you guys ~
i know i need lot of improvements ~
but i just can't figure out where i need to work on ~
sorry for the broken english ~
thanks in advance for any feedbacks ~
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Last edited by jonathanho on Jan-02-2005 at 17:42

Hi!

(Funny how I just notice that my brother has the same name as you )

When I listen to this, I hear a good Trance production lying within' I guess the only thing that lacks (for now) are the drums. They sound like 808-synthesizer drums. The second thing you could do, is look to the synthesizers you are using. They might be outdated/simple, but I think many of it can be fixed when giving them some more reverb. You already have added good delays!

MAN, come to think of it: Many producers don't even come up with such feeling for good melodic Trance! If they put you behind good equipment, you would probably be 'accepted' more.
It's just that it sounds like a demo... The musical aspects are good, but the sound is (sorry to say it) way too outdated AND its mastering is too bad (for now)

Give it some more work on the last points mentioned