I took a few of your opinions and make some changes in the song and i wanted to see if now sounds better so im going to post the new link.







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Fictivision vs Phynn-Escape(Rapid Remix)

Last edited by RAPID X on Jan-10-2005 at 21:37

it think your bass pad and kick are disturbing each other a bit...pad sounds too deep for my taste...the high bassline is kinda annoying after a little while...try to keep it more round, not such a raw sound...main mellow goes a bit down under the heavy bassline...if it was your intention, ok...but it would do it the other way round...percs are basic but okay...
with some more work the remix could be quite cool...

the bass is way to loud and annoying, and you should keep the melodysynth tune going much louder all the time.. it creates much of the track. and make the beats harder too.

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Guys thanks for the feedback thanks to you i realize that the bass ws really really high,and it was making some kind of destortion with the kick,the snare and the melody but keep telling me what else can i do for making the tune better.

bass synth is way too overpowering

like the acidy soudn to it... bring out the lead more

the original of this song is definatley one of my favs as well, a beautiful melody, bring it out and let everybody hear that melody

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I quite liked it. Forgetting what the other have said I think you'v e done an alright job of what is an amazingly meldic and beautiful track.
Had you come up with the chords and string paterns yourself it would have been a remarkable job but as it is its a not bad tune with some nice bit and some not so nice bits.

You defo need some fx in there to give it some more atmos and maybe have a think about changing some of the sounds to some more classy less obvious sounds.

Over all I liked it

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pretty bad effort...i think. Nothing of the great melody and atmosphere can be found back in this remix.

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that was a bit harsh

yeah the bassline has alot of noise in it.. buzzing and it is very loud.. try to tone it down.. and add some more depth to the main melody

structure it a bit better so the whole song kicks in nicely


harmonically though its on


good luck

Well now it sounds better for me so i post the new link in the original post just download it again a then tell me what you think.

here's my opinion about some things you could improve

> i think you have an acoustic problem about the kick. On my headphones it sounds like it's coming "from the back of the room". Maybe some others can second that. Perhaps you have some reverb on it that gives this effect ? i'd suggest making the kick coming back a bit more in front of the mix.

> the bass is maybe a bit harsh, it gives a good groove to the song, but try a bit more EQing on it, i'm sure it can sound better.

> i love this melody

> in the main part you seem to have some mixing problems. You have that sound coming around 3:10 and i think it blurs your mix. try keeping some distinct frequencies for each sound

> keep up the work man !

static blue

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