*listening*
kick is cool, but bassline could be punchier, imo...
lead synth is well done...the melody it plays is very nice aswell...
breakbeats are fine!
i wished there were some more elements in the mainpart of the track...
perhaps a piano or a guitar with a different melody playing over it....

overall some very nice ideas in the track...with some work it could be a real nice epictrancer! hope you can motivate yourself to work on it a bit again...

Nice Track - Sweeping Synth Is Great

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thanx for the feedback

piano is a good idea. generally i'm not too fond of those, but it might work in this case

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I feel the whole thing is lacking drive, not sure if you wanted any.

I must say the synth work and sounds are nicly done, pads are good, guessing a malstorm?

Breakbeats are really good.

I don't feel a huge climax or something, it just seems that the track keeps going on without anything really new.

Needs more mixers mate

the song sounds nice, but it does lack drive. To me it sounds very winding, but most of which ive heard which are made in reasons seem to give this effect.

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Originally posted by Massive84 Needs more mixers mate

lol, i know, i know. usually there's at least three mixers in my tracks.. but this one was meant to be simple, to protest against all the "overcharged" productions that have been flooding the scene lately.

and there are no Malströms in this track, i'm still on Reason 1.01

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