Hey everybody!

I finished my track called Second Chance.
I hope you like it.

http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=8065
Length: 6:10
Size: 8,48 Mb
Bitrate: 192 kbps

Feedbacks are appreciated.

Thanks for the lots of replies.

ur melodies are kewl, but still a bit too much going oon at once, and u gotta make ur song fuller, its too empty at the moment
u need to make stronger bass, stronger kick, guitar needs work and synths need more sharpening,
but its good start m8, keep at it, ur not too far from getin it done...
good luck

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Thanks Sunquest!

One of the things I just really love in this track is the kick, actually I am quite jealous

The build up to the break is a bit empty indeed but the melody is lovely and the lead itself has an original sound

The bass is also nice, overall I very much like this track and it surprises me that so few people have reacted so far. Just try to EQ your lead a bit more to make it stand out from the rest. And do no change the kick, it is beautiful

One tip though, Energy 87 is really not an original name since one of the godtracks ever was from Enery 52 and being compared to Energy 52 is always a losing situation

Keep up the good work!

Cheers,

Nomen Nescio

Thanks Nomen Nescio!

You are the only men how like my kick

Perhaps not an original name but I like it

a little too simplistic... needs more layers, percussion sounds fine, lead is aright (the gliding gets a tad bit annoying after a while)


add submelodies and sudmelodies

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NumberNin6 / Ethereal / Orana Project / Greenlight

i really like this track, just needs filling out a bit with some more pads, the basic structure of the song is there, and very strong I must say, love the piano (i like pianos in trance) let me know when you do some more work on this track, would love to include it in one of my mixes