Pretty bizzare intro That synth makes me feel drunk. Portamento out the butt! I like the direction of the track dude, but it is a little out there. Mixdown needs work. What Progs are you working with?
Just keep working on it. Needs a little more layers, maybe like some different beats, or strings?

edit: or a bridge of some kind

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yeah i'm adding another layer or two to the bassline and tweaking it a lot
just used fruity loops 4 and z3ta+ with the virus bank
and i'm probably gonna change up the drums a lot more
that link there's only about 2 hours worth of work so the drums are just the same looped
and strings i was thinking of also...something chinese perhaps, like in incubus - aqueous transmission right in the beginning
might just sample that actually
thanks for the feedback

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Hi!!

Nice fx

Hmmm. Your chillout song don't have message for me . Maybe i feel bad ??

I don't know??

Greetings

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Last edited by Sunclyder on Feb-02-2005 at 13:12

not bad
I don't like the 303 fx.
nice melody.
I don't find it that relaxing but its easy-listening
3/5

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thanks for the input
when i was first writing the song the harsh odd placed synth really worked for me just cause of the mood i was in when i wrote it, but i changed it around a bit and found something that still has some of the same harsh qualities but w/o being so abrasive, i definately like this version better
also a few more effects added etc, worked on the mix as well

new version edited into the original post, check it out

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