Ok,this is a Goa track I just finished,plz some feedback would be great and thanx in advance .

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nice track it has a cool feel. effects are very clean and that piano in the middle is sweet

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Nice and crisp sound as Atarti Addict said. Certaily has that eastern spooky style of a good goa track. I love that wailing sound. It reminds me of some of the sounds from ghost in the shell.

The snare sounds a bit tinny even for a goa track. You got a nice piano riff at 3.03 which I think works well, you could maybe do more with it... roll it back up again or something? Theres also a bit at 4.20 where I was expecting it to really kick in with some more goa style madness, but no joy

Overall, a very sweet sounding track tho =)

the all ideea and the bild-up quite great...try to add a new instrument to the theme....just curious:what did you used?

Atari,
Thanks man,I worked pretty much with the compressor to make it sound like that .

Axolotyl,
Thanks man,you are right,I have to agree that second part with the outro is pretty mmm without variations,I am adding some really nice synths and working in that snare .


tonkproject,
Thanks bro,I used sitrus for almost all,the first lead(The one filtered),the bass,the synths you listen in the second part with sequence added,and for the whistle ,the rest are random wav FX .

Thnaks to all for the comments!Improved version coming soon .
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The first thing I noticed was that this track sounds very "clean". If that was your intention, it's just fine, but sometimes a "washy" sound is needed. I think in your case it's just fine ... I think the chords at 2:30 don't seem to fit that good with the rest of the song.. But when that (great) Piano comes in they fit much better ... Oh, great Piano ... I don't think I can criticize further, this track is just

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Originally posted by cybernetica The first thing I noticed was that this track sounds very "clean". If that was your intention, it's just fine, but sometimes a "washy" sound is needed. I think in your case it's just fine ... I think the chords at 2:30 don't seem to fit that good with the rest of the song.. But when that (great) Piano comes in they fit much better ... Oh, great Piano ... I don't think I can criticize further, this track is just

LOL...,hey glad to see ur review here man thanks .
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Anymore review? :P
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I kinda like the intro. Bass line = too dry and cheesy. honestly, I think this track would sound a lot better if it were less compressed, especially the percussion. Nice overall sound.

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Originally posted by nic01445 I kinda like the intro. Bass line = too dry and cheesy. honestly, I think this track would sound a lot better if it were less compressed, especially the percussion. Nice overall sound.

Thanks,I work3ed specially to make ti sound that way over compressed .
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The intro is kinda boring, imo. And the bassline is strange. Yet, it's kinda cool. Funky. And I don't understand WHY you want a song to sound overcompressed, heh

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Originally posted by dj_palm very nice tune with good productions. but the kick together with baseline is a bit too early 90s i think. and i think u need some more percusion so it gets more energetic. very nice melodies and athmospere. my favorit synth here is the one i think goes through the whole tune but its alone between 3:25 and 3:38 thats my favorit sound of the tune its so dreamy and sweet. I agree to wath someone else said that it should have been some kind of "takeoff" at 4:22 its a bit of anticlimax(or whatever its called) there!! anyhow a very comfortable tune to listen to when u have a bad hangover and wants to dream away and forget what u did thw last day, hehe

Thanks fella .
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