trance song

please listen made it last week have a remix as well but il post that when ive the two completely done....what u think???????????????????????????

mayb you should post a LITTLE more information about the track and yourself...would be nice

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Listening now...very low bitrate.

Track doesnt sound to good to me...sorry. Track lacks any kind of bass, there is completely no low end. You got the basics covered i guess but your whole sound is not very pro, i think you are a beginner right? Your percussion samples are very thin and empty, your synths are very thin as well. BUt that are thigns that will improve when you make more and more tracks. Your melodies are ok, and your structure as well. Just keep producing and u will improve.

Stijn

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Upcoming shit:
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Vast Vision ft. Fisher - Behind your Smile | Enhanced
Vast Vision - Ambrosia | FSOE/Armada
Vast Vision - Black Shores | FSOE/Armada
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http://www.vast-vision.com
http://www.myspace.com/vastvisionmusic

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im 18 this is my first production, from ireland.bitrate is low i apologise.how do i add depth to percussions does anyone know??