Listening now...

Nice start, quite low key. Nice sweeping filter effect and hihat. Kick could do with more work. synth at :44 is good and sits well in the track
Building up...

At 1.45 the synth that comes in is a bit thin. Also the track seems to loose a bit of momentum..

The breakdown at 2.28 has some nice pads in it. The beat is setting up for something a bit deeper...

3.13 the synth kicks back in and is quite nice a rezzy then goes back to that thin one from the start, not sure if I like it too much.

I quite like the breakdowns and the ambience of this track, but I think the lead could do with more work to sit in better with the rest of the track. Right now its a bit too doninant and stops the track from diving along nicely. Try some delay or reverb perhaps or just EQ it to not be so dominant.

Good luck with it all =)

thanks for the comments, I will work on the synths... I wish i had money to buy myself a hardware synth.

hehe... doesn't everyone? You can get the same sort of sound using software, you just need to layer it a lot more. Double up your synths and also try detuning them to get a phatter sound.

Good luck

thanks for the tip, I will try it

resurected, hope i get more than 1 comment...