hey Björn

not sure which style you wanted to recreate, but anyway, here's my opinion about your track:

- kick is really weak, use a much more punchier kick and eq it right
- bassline is alright
- i like the effects, and percussions, they are too quiet, though
- the melody is really simple imo, needs much more complex melodies, some lovely driving ones
- needs more changing in the whole track, i mean the structure
- theres some dissonance in the whole track throughout
- it needs serious eqing

it needs radical changes in my opinion,

just my 2 cents

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