Sounds like an awesome track until you get to the ridiculous german(?) vocals. The vocoder work is pretty good and the rest of the track is pretty good for the most part. Tthough there are a few sections you could work on like the counter-rythm sound half way through the track, its overpowering the beautiful pad underneath it. Crank up the volume on that pad too. Drop the german vokes man, seriously, if you would do that, it would be a tune :P.

Cheers,
Zac

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Thanks for your comment. Do you mean the distorted 303ish sound that starts a few beats before the pad? I'll try to drop its volume maybe it's a good idea to keep the focus more on the athmosperic touch (pad).

BTW: The original track is kinda gothic / rammstein parody and made with humorous intention. I know I walk on a borderline with this experimental track containing many male vocals that are funny and... german - and I understand that it may sound ridiculous to non-german-speakers. It may sound ridiculous to germans as well- but that's a question of humour. But somehow I like it because I never heard something like that before - and I'll let many non-vocal tracks follow for sure ;-)

bye/
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