Sounds good but the entire track, mmm, bit thin. Not sure how else to describe it. I'll see about doing some mastering work on it but I do like it . Good instrument choices, jsut needs some work.

Cheers,
Zac

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Hey, great track man! Here's my opinion on this.

1) at around 25 seconds mark, you have the claps playing every other beat. i would add 1 more clap (3 per measure) to make it seem more exciting.

2) the sound that enters at 1:20 mark is good.
3) I don't like the chirping sound at 1:50 mark. However, I really like that synth sound that accompany the chirping sound.

4) I don't like the bongos sound at 2:15 mark. It's not a bad sound, but sound "somewhat" weak introducing a massive theme.

Overall, very pleasing. Keep up the good work.

futurefoton929,
Good point about the claps .

IDarkISwordI,
Thanks .

Thanks guys for the constructive critique .
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Originally posted by Darkness_Hero futurefoton929, Good point about the claps . IDarkISwordI, Thanks . Thanks guys for the constructive critique . Kopi =o.

Hahahaha that was supossed to be me, damn I forgot to log out from my bro account .
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very happy melody
sounds sooo good with the armin plug in for winamp im HOOKED on that thing

sometimes theres too much delay on that piano, the notes clash into eachother, also clap needs to be better, kick should be thicker and stronger, i love the bass notes, very old style

u got lots of good elements in here, i quite like this, very relaxing, soothing, something to clean my ears out hehe

7.954/10 on my Sunmeter

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Originally posted by Sunquest very happy melody sounds sooo good with the armin plug in for winamp im HOOKED on that thing sometimes theres too much delay on that piano, the notes clash into eachother, also clap needs to be better, kick should be thicker and stronger, i love the bass notes, very old style u got lots of good elements in here, i quite like this, very relaxing, soothing, something to clean my ears out hehe 7.954/10 on my Sunmeter

HAHAHAHA sunmeter!!LOL ... Thanks mate for the constructive critique .
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hey... this sounds really nice...

the one thing i don't really like is the bassline.... i dunno just doesn't appeal to me too much. but i like all your other elements... you use the synths nicely.. with the melodies coming in and building strongly..

another thing i didn't really like is your clap.. but thats just personal preference again..

nice work...


p.s. feel free to check out my track in this forum Hydro - Morning haze.. hehe. just wanting some feedback..

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Originally posted by trancinchink hey... this sounds really nice... the one thing i don't really like is the bassline.... i dunno just doesn't appeal to me too much. but i like all your other elements... you use the synths nicely.. with the melodies coming in and building strongly.. another thing i didn't really like is your clap.. but thats just personal preference again.. nice work... p.s. feel free to check out my track in this forum Hydro - Morning haze.. hehe. just wanting some feedback..

Thanks for the constructive feedback man, I already reviewed you .
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Hey Kopi!
First of all, cool track. Sounds well produced as always!
Think the clap has a bit too much reverb (or you could try making the reverb less noisy).
This is a great summer melody .. Usually I'm not so much a fan of happy trance, but this is just great.
The saw-pad is too loud if you ask me, surpresses the arpeggiated synth. Great melody at 3:19, very dreamy. Makes me miss the summer (yes, here it's still zero degrees :| )
Super great layering! Cool piano part... getting really nice towards the end... Production, like I said, is just great, except maybe that the pad sounds a bit noisy and a bit too dominant... maybe.
Great one, keep it up!

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Originally posted by cybernetica Hey Kopi! First of all, cool track. Sounds well produced as always! Think the clap has a bit too much reverb (or you could try making the reverb less noisy). This is a great summer melody .. Usually I'm not so much a fan of happy trance, but this is just great. The saw-pad is too loud if you ask me, surpresses the arpeggiated synth. Great melody at 3:19, very dreamy. Makes me miss the summer (yes, here it's still zero degrees :| ) Super great layering! Cool piano part... getting really nice towards the end... Production, like I said, is just great, except maybe that the pad sounds a bit noisy and a bit too dominant... maybe. Great one, keep it up!

Cyber!
Thanks for the constructive critique and the support broda !
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