This track is something I've been working on for a little bit. The track's not really finished and is still in it's drafting stage. Tell me what you guys think and I'll gladly take some suggestions as to what else can be done for this track..

http://s12.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...LB148ERM0MBRGN9

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Last edited by Resequenced on Mar-14-2005 at 09:21

commenting as i listen to the tune. very nice kick, mate. cool percussions, as well. i do *not* like that hi-hat or whatever it is that's sounding in the background (comes in at the same time as the open hi-hat), please get rid of it increase the bassline a tad in volume. and you could make the stereo image of the percussions narrower. add some pads to the break and make it a minute or two longer. as for the melody, it's ok. 5/10 overall, i'd say. hopefully you won't kick my ass for criticising your tune

then again, i never tell a painter how his paintings should look keep up the work, mate! good things will come in the end!

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