well first impression is that the frequencies closer to the left are fucked up
ummm...
no build up or break downs or anything
delay's are fucked
very lo fi
dont feel any bassline
like the claps tho
hmmmm
you probably listened to this tune for 100 times, and cannot tell the difference between good and bad anymore

you need to practice more bro
you know, if i would play it in a club, everyone would go "booOOOO"
what soft did you use?

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well mr. ashely... u never checked back for ur "in a freefall" remix... haha if u still wanna hear it i'll send it to u..

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Mixed Genre Mixes [50s, 60s, 70s, 80s, 90s, 00s]:
MGM 6 /
MGM 5 / MGM 4 /
MGM 3 / MGM 2 / MGM 1


Electronic Dance Music Mixes:
EDM 7

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on da music section... its in da list somewhere... like i described it i only used a few of ur percussion, and the only thing noticable from ur original is the notes used from ur "vsynth" channel.

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Mixed Genre Mixes [50s, 60s, 70s, 80s, 90s, 00s]:
MGM 6 /
MGM 5 / MGM 4 /
MGM 3 / MGM 2 / MGM 1


Electronic Dance Music Mixes:
EDM 7

well this one is better, but again, dont post anything which is not nearly done, why not finish it and then post it?

i was like that, making something within an hour or two and the post it, "look at me!, i am making tunes!, look look look"

unfortunatelly, thats not the way it works, and most producers on this forum will tell you the same thing, noone wants to tell you what you need to do with your song, cuz unless your dumb, it should be pretty obvious to yourself.

now what version of FL you have, is it the latest one?
on latest one you can do A LOT, so please, next time just remember that puting links here, is just like presenting a gift to someone. Boy wouldnt they be happy to find a brick in that shiny wrapping paper, or a broken chinese vase.

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quote:

Originally posted by ******** it's actually pretty flattering to be in with remixes of barbers adiago and the orange theme track has a nice groove I like how you worked it, much better sounding then my original version

heh, thanks for the compliment! although, I actually like urs better than mine -- by the way, do you know where i can download it, i lost it in a pc crash.

thanks.

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Mixed Genre Mixes [50s, 60s, 70s, 80s, 90s, 00s]:
MGM 6 /
MGM 5 / MGM 4 /
MGM 3 / MGM 2 / MGM 1


Electronic Dance Music Mixes:
EDM 7