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I like the bassline

long snare is cool although it's starting to get kinda boring maybe it's cause not much has happend yet, I dunno. I'd either not add the snare in till later, or add more stuff in earlier.

The pads at 2:20, kinda came out of no where, although they sound good, just kinda sudden transition that's all

the main melody at 3:25 it's cool, but it seems a little too simple, and the voice you used is kinda generic(for lack of a better term)

I like the way you built up from the first breakdown

percussion sounds pretty good all in all

it would definently rock, if there were more layers added at the climax

Keep up the good work dude!

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