Hasn't been cleared yet man.

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still not cleared. looking forward to hear this. always loved the original.

Waiting to clear man

ok people the song has now cleared so any feedback would be great!

whilst ive been waiting on the track to clear ive started to master it a bit more now and clear up the frequencies also!

cheers

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

good percussions in the beginning
dont like the bass at all, even for a hardtrance bass.
clap may be a bit thin, not sure.
good percussion layers.
whispered synth melody could use some variation

i dont really like the synth sounds you use, they are too harsh to my ears but that might only be my taste.


overall, good job, it's way too hard for me, but youve got some powerful clubby sounds going.

keep it up

static

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cheers for the review SB

like i was saying ive been changing it around slightly so when ive finished it and uploaded it hopefully itll be a bit better

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

ok, i'll check it again once it's finished

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Originally posted by staticblue ok, i'll check it again once it's finished

cheers just thought id get some feedback on this so i could make any major/minor changes before uploading the newer one yeah im lazy

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

This is sounding pretty good, though it gets way too repetitive for me after a while. A case of less is more, perhaps? Anyhoo, it's something of a shame that your bangin' bass and percussion gets overtaken by the main synth. Try reducing the volume of the main synth and the track might drive itself along a bit better. Of course, the 128kbps bitrate isn't helping anything. Now finish it! I'm bored of unfinished tracks and samples.

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cheers MaRt for the review

yeah i have noticed that myself about the synth volume and it has been lowered in the mastered version ive been working on, also extended the breakdown so ill be uploading after i get more feedback on this one!

any more people?

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08/01/16

Big Dave/little Dave

yeah it is kinda repetative and long... but good idea's thrown in all around the track.
I find it hard to get the right levels and the percussion right in this genre so thats why i stick to drum n bass lol.
The synth volume definateley needs lowering a touch as it just overpowers the main kick ever so slightly in my opinion. but then again im listening on headphones right now so it will probably sound completeley different if i play it again through my normal speakers.

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